the husband, the guest

November 24, 2006

in the husband

Here he is again. To offend, inspire and be the best darn husband anybody ever deserved. Shane's Guest Post #2. Rules: jess may not touch or edit.
Jess is feeling burned out with daily blogging and working on her book, so I've been recruited to do a guest post.
I don't read her blog that often because I don't want her to feel like she needs to censor anything. Writing honestly is hard enough without me chirping in with "what did you mean by that" kind of comments. But I do secretly look periodically to make sure she's doing okay.
I noticed that she'd written that it's been 16 years since we started dating and it got me thinking about when we first started dating. We met in creative writing class at Capilano College. I was a young wanna-be poet. I was awful. And truthfully, my writing couldn't have been what she liked about me.
Especially since Jess was the best writer in our class. She just wrote in a truthful, wonderfully vulnerable, but snappy way.
In University she wrote a book of poetry. I'm currently holding the only remaining copy. I read it a few weeks ago for the first time in a decade and it reminded me of that time of our life.
I want to share with you one poem from it. To preface this, it's important to note that I hate poetry. I never read it anymore, and inwardly cringe when I think about it. But her's are so good, so that's why I want to share it with you. I picked this one because it is about the day just before we got together. I thought you might like it.
Remembrance day
On remembrance day
i chased you
through the grassy trail
of your old school
showing me
something
remembering
kissing games
in the soggy woods
when i caught you
our breaths wet & heavy
in the air
i wanted to kiss you but
walking back to the cement
it was easier
I was thinking that she should reissue this little poetry book for her blog readers. I think it would be a nice insight into what she was like as a younger women. I'm sure she'll be horribly embarrassed by it. But if you are interested, why don't you leave a comment and ask her to send you a copy. If enough people request it, I'll bet we can guilt her into doing it.
p.s. if Jess gets more than 15 requests, she's agreed to release it. So comment, god dammit!
shane
xxoo

{ 32 comments }

Kim November 24, 2006 at 9:43 pm

I’d love to see some of her past work :)

mom on a wire November 24, 2006 at 9:47 pm

I want to read it!!!

Kari November 24, 2006 at 10:06 pm

Of course I want Jess’ poetry!

kathleen November 25, 2006 at 2:36 am

Add me to the list, please!

Elizabeth November 25, 2006 at 3:43 am

Yes, please!

blackbird November 25, 2006 at 3:55 am

Please release it…

Denise November 25, 2006 at 4:07 am

Duh of course she should publish it as a blog book. Big duh.
As my boss tells me 800 times a week – at the end of the day, a blog is just another publishing tool and we can use it in any way that we choose to use it.
Duh, publish the darn book Jess. Use the tools available to you. And don’t wait for 15 comments – why would you ever let 15 other people make such a decision for you?

summer November 25, 2006 at 6:39 am

I would love to see this!

daysgoby November 25, 2006 at 7:40 am

Words are wonderful things – I would love to read your poetry, Jess.

KC November 25, 2006 at 7:45 am

Coming out of lurkdom to say I would love to read it. I am amazed by how openly you write about one of the hardest things a person can go through.
GO FOR IT!

m November 25, 2006 at 8:07 am

Yes, please. Time to reprint that baby!

Lisa November 25, 2006 at 8:29 am

Another lurker saying: yes please :)

Melanie November 25, 2006 at 9:06 am

Another regular reader, delurking to say that I’d love to read more of your poetry.

Chair November 25, 2006 at 11:32 am

Jess, babe, if you really were being shy about it you would have said you needed 50 comments because you know getting 15 comments will be a breeze. Of course we want your book!!
:^)

Kathy November 25, 2006 at 12:31 pm

Do it!

starrynite November 25, 2006 at 1:00 pm

Yes please, me too!

MotherHubbard November 25, 2006 at 3:30 pm

Please add me.

Alison November 25, 2006 at 4:18 pm

Ditto!

katie November 25, 2006 at 6:12 pm

i would like to read IT!

Yayagirl November 25, 2006 at 6:36 pm

not only do you have a great hubby, you are a fantastic writer. i’d love a copy of course! :)

Ada November 25, 2006 at 7:37 pm

Sounds fantastic!
That posem he’s just posted is wonderful – I’m not so much a poetry fan myself, save for Dorothy Parker.

gwendomama November 25, 2006 at 9:02 pm

well jes, dear, not only are you clearly IN for this one, but your husband?
he rocks.

jennifer November 25, 2006 at 10:58 pm

i want, i want… do it. i will pay!

Ashley November 26, 2006 at 12:28 pm

This post brought me out of lurkdom, that must say something.

jerusalem November 26, 2006 at 6:01 pm

Lovely man. Lovely poem. Please publish. The End.

LetterB November 26, 2006 at 6:58 pm

Your husband is such a comment whore.
Yes, by all means, yes republish. I’ll do a trade with you – i have copies of an old chapbook in a box somewhere. Tempting? Ha!

kilowatthour November 27, 2006 at 4:31 am

yes, please. one book for me.

ade November 27, 2006 at 9:07 am

Jess, I vote for a re-release! Shane does not have the only remaining copy, though, I still have mine!
I have a friend in Victoria with a printing press, too!
xox

TB November 27, 2006 at 3:20 pm

I hope I’m not too late to chime in.

Jenijen November 27, 2006 at 8:24 pm

I demand a copy. Demand.

Tricia November 28, 2006 at 8:44 pm

Please!

Renee December 1, 2006 at 7:07 am

I’m sorry I’m just now reading this.
Me too!

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